Jasmine Hart

Times done NaNoWriMo: I did an unofficial one in August 2007 on "Inspired Writers", but I've never done the official one. '08 NaNo Name: I'm not entirely sure...Thinking of restarting ...

I'm reading "The Host" by Stephanie Meyers. It's taking me a while to get into and I don't think it's as good as the "Twilight" series. I do like Melanie, ...

I didn't really Kit. Like, if you'd asked me then to descibe what you looked like in my head I don't think I'd have been able to answer...but then I ...

I don't know why I'm always surprised whenever I see you photo, Kit. Your hair has a bit of red in it. You're stunning in the first one.

Nana Medley hadn’t been sleeping well. Every time she shut her eyes, terrifying shadows coursed their way across her mind. She snapped them open and sat up, her breathing unsteady, ...

I love the rhythm of this, it really sweeps you away. The rhyme is very effective and you have some great imagery. The tone suits it perfectly. I'll just go ...

Hey Kit. : ) This is beautifully written. I love the tone and the imagery. You build suspense well, and the characters are well drawn. I'm not sure about how ...

They're really beautiful Kit. I can't offer anything constructive, given that I know nothing about photography. One, seven and nine are my favourites. Looks like you had lovely weather for ...

I'm sitting back. The muses still haven't come. I edited and transcribed my poetry and now I'm doing the same with my short stories. I've also posted the first chapter ...

Chapter One Although the letter had only arrived that morning, Gypsy had already folded and unfolded it so many times that a tear was forming along the central crease. She ...

Yay! I love random facts! Nice to know a little about you. Jas

Huh. Didn't realise "Thanks a million" was an Irish thing... I think "Are ya right?"/ "Ye right?" is an Irish thing too...that would be usually used for "are you ready?" ...

Your imagery is really beautiful, especially "Moonlight dances in the water, while midnight makes its approach". I love the sibilance of; "Serene streams trickle slowly", it fits in beautifully with ...

This gave me shivers up my spine and at the base of my neck...I can't quite explain it, but I figured I'd share it with you anyway! Your imagery and ...

This is a beautiful, moving poem. The tone is great and it flows well. My only suggestion is that you add "that" before each of the "he will" s. Was ...